Let me know how you think!
I can't help feeling it when I'm here all alone
cuz when
I'm with my girlfriends they say girl leave it alone
it's my itch
it's my itch
late at night when I'm just trying to go to bed
it just
creeps up upon me like a voice inside my head
it's my itch
it says
come on babe, just one more time
you'll be all right
but I can't give in or I'll lose myself
this burning feeling's my living hell
it's my itch
it's like
a broken record whisp’ring just give up the fight
but my
heart keeps on telling me go to bed for tonight
it's my itch
it's my itch
it sings
don't fight me now
just once won't hurt anyhow
but my heart keeps fighting, I won't give up
this girl's no quitter so just shut up
it's my itch
it's my itch
I'm stronger than my body's wants
I won't give in to this stupid taunt
I know I'm better than a destructive need
but it won't go, the feeling won't leave
it's my itch
it's my itch
firstly - you spelled tendencies wrong, lol
ReplyDeletesecondly - wow! this is good, actually. It could apply to any kind of self-destructive behavior - cutting, hitting, anything. Even shooting up heroin or something, actually.
In Mr. Tonk's AP Lit class, we talked about the difference between commercial and literary writing, and the difference is that literary writing possesses broad themes, themes and concepts and ideas that can be applied to a lot of different things. And this counts. So kudos to you, darling!